Sunday, March 18, 2012

Jealousy

A New Poet
Jealousy.  I love the metaphor she uses, how it makes it relatable and easy to understand.  The words flow so well together that you can swim in them.  The way she forms the words draws pictures in my mind and makes it exciting to read.  And it gives me hope.  It makes me feel like, as a writer, even if no one sees the beauty of my flower at first, one day someone will. 

2 comments:

  1. I agree that's really well done. Great poem to pick

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  2. "The words flow so well together that you can swim in them." Best way to say something like that, evaaaarrr.

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